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Post by Sora Keyblade Master on Thu Jun 14, 2007 3:51 am

I don't know about you guys but I love writing poems check this one and tell me what you think. If anybody elss wants to put a poem feel free to do it.

Vanilla Thoughts

Seeing you far, is hard for me,
because I want you close.
Today you told me what you think,
and kisses you like most.

Everytime you feel bad,
you donít think people care.
I really want to show you,
that I love you and Iíll always be there.

Showing you what Iím made of,
can make you see the truth.
That you may have lost the battle,
but the war you won by proof.

The more I get to know you,
I question more and more.
So many women in the world,
why didnít I met you before?


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Post by Thias on Thu Jun 14, 2007 6:03 am

Destiny

I've always felt that there was somthing better
Somthing thats avoided us somthing greater
Why is it somthing I want to find
Is this destiny calling or is it just in my mind
Its like a whisper in my ear
Somthing I cant help but to hear
I feel like its drawing me in
To make me discover what's within
Silent to others and only heared by me
Maybe this was meant to be
To find a great destiny hidden inside
In a person who's afraid and feels like they need to hide
But why in me would I try to find greatness
A person who feels insignificant and has weakness
I know now this is a calling
Im not sure what will happen or what will becoming
I will one day find whats calling me in this confusion im in
For very soon my destiny will begin.............




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Post by Sora Keyblade Master on Thu Jun 14, 2007 6:41 am

Blaire that one is awesome.

Bubbles

Someone so beautiful shouldnít feel sad,
thereís no point for being so mad.
Youíre a great friend, I say that, Iím glad,
you make me feel good, when I feel so bad.

Sometimes I wish you were here with me,
so that we can talk and make you see,
that even at the worst time Iím happy to be,
beside someone like you, so special to me.

I can imagine if someday we meet,
weíll hang out all day until weíre on our feet.
Sometimes emotions are hard to beat,
cause no one knows the problems you keep.

Turn them to bubbles and blow them away,
youíll feel better just donít let them stay.
thereís one more thing for me left to say,
forget all your problems, be happy okay.


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Post by  on Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:10 am

Im not very good at this so ill make it short

Tiger
Thy stripes are divine
A true mystic creature
Your body true and fine
Your eyes a majestic feature

Thou is courages
A hunter ready to strike
A legend that will live for ages


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Post by Miharu_Ogawa on Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:29 am

Not necessarily to bring people down but this is a peom I wrote after my Best Friend/Grandmother died. I named it for the number of the hospital room she died in.

3208
Close your eyes, Close your eyes.
They are weary and ready for sleep.
So close them, nevermind the passersby.
Rest your eyes for they have seen much and they are weary.

Rest your body, Rest you head.
They are tired and they are weak
So let them rest upon your bed.
You've endured much in this battle and you are weary.

Sleep now. Just sleep Grandma.
My eyes see that you are weary from this fight.
So I tell you " I love you", hoping it says all.
For I say it with more meaning and emotion than ever of the millions from long ago nights.

(Geez....I reread it and now I'm tearing up...)

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EDIT: I'm adding a second poem.

I wrote another cathartic poem to express my jumble of emotions over my friend dating a guy behind my back and within a short period of time getting engaged to him. I fuzzed out their names; that's what the asterisks are.

I haven't named it so....

-I've known of your infatuation from the start
Done my best to shield your heart
from the the pains of broken courtship
thinking it my part of a good friendship

Years passed
My guard relaxed

One week later, after our day of fun,
your closer friend spilled a plain confirmation
to the inkling fear I had quietly nursed.
The names ******** and **** I audibly cursed.

Days went by
Tears I cried

I reluctantly accepted your new status.
To open your eyes, I felt as a friend, that I must.
For you would not see him in ways that you needed.
No matter who counseled either party, you never heeded.

Weeks flew away
And now there's today

You show me your hand and time is meaningless.
I grip your gaze and utter a cold "What's that?"
Trying to be sweet and lighthearted you reply " What's it look like?"
Your facial expression, knotted brow yet smiling, almost asking forgiveness.

My tongue is frozen
My heart is frozen
My mind is burning
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Post by Twilight Sora on Thu Jun 14, 2007 11:20 pm

I have to say all of your poems are Fabulous Very Happy
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Post by Kize on Fri Jun 15, 2007 12:39 am

I thought I really loved you,
I thought I really cared.
But then I ripped your heart out,
and left your spirit bare.

It was always in my plan like this,
I was supposed to break your heart.
Then you had to kiss me,
and take me from the start.

So love me yesterday,
Hate me today,
forget me tomorrow.
Remember not your sorrow.


Because without me, you're better off,
even though I love you.
Don't come back to save me,
Even if your love is true.

I don't deserve you anymore,
I doubt I ever did.
So don't shed anymore tears for me,
I only ever hid.

So love me yesterday,
Hate me today,
forget me tomorrow.
Remember not your sorrow.


I've taken off the mask,
and shown you who I am.

I'm sorry that I hurt you,
I'm sorry that I ran.


So love me yesterday,
Hate me today,
forget me tomorrow.
Let me have your sorrow
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Post by Miharu_Ogawa on Fri Jun 15, 2007 12:55 am

Wow... That was very good, Kize.
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Post by Kize on Fri Jun 15, 2007 1:03 am

Thx! I don't even know why I wrote it. It just comes to me. I don't even think when I write poems. But all of my poems are very depressing, you would never know based on how cheerful I am all the time though. Very Happy
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Post by Miharu_Ogawa on Fri Jun 15, 2007 1:13 am

Ditto....well, not ALL of my poems. I have maybe 2 that aren't depressing. I put on a pretty good facade for people to see. The proverbial Happy Face.
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Post by Kize on Fri Jun 15, 2007 1:15 am

Lol, You're not the only one!
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Post by Sora Keyblade Master on Fri Jun 15, 2007 6:48 am

I like all of them, I'm not gonna put one of my songs here.
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Post by Miharu_Ogawa on Fri Jun 15, 2007 7:21 am

You're not? Why not?
Songs (some songs anyway) are poetry set to music.
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Post by Darkness Falls on Sat Jun 16, 2007 3:34 am

Miharu_Ogawa wrote:You're not? Why not?
Songs (some songs anyway) are poetry set to music.

Um not nowadays. lol.

Rap is poetry. A bit dirty, but still poetry.

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Post by Miharu_Ogawa on Sat Jun 16, 2007 4:05 am

You don't listen to a wide enough variety then Razz
Rap is not the only this that constitutes as poetry in the music world. And there is the rare rap song that isn't dirty (Kick, Push- escaping reality for a while by skate boarding).
I think I'll make a different thread so we can talk about music. Even though some of it is poetry that doesn't make this the place to talk about it. Smile

*scampers off to make Music topic*
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Post by Darkness Falls on Wed Jun 11, 2008 6:04 am

Empty Memories
Theres simply much too remember
Too much to perceive
Too much to look out for
At least it is for me

We've had our good and our bad
Times I'll keep in mind
Things we've both enjoyed
I hope that you will find

Differences changed our future
Differences; Abrasive as an emery
Take our past to heart
They're not just Empty Memories

So do it for the love of art
Do it like we did before
Show me that you love me
My star-crossed lover

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